wow, good, i'd like to read the rest of it...

Good story. i like the way it's going. please continue.

This was good. Nice job.

cool. update soon

wow...sad. i like the direction this is taking. update?

Cute. Ally is a bit like I used to be, thinking I had no talents. But God gives us all gifts and strengths. We may not be prodigious, but by working hard we can achieve great things. I'm interested to see where this is going. Good luck!