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| ADSpencer 2005-11-07 ch 1, | abuseWhat a nightmare..lol. |
| Oriel Vaughn 2005-11-07 ch 1, | abuseHehe, cute one. Just wondering... did you mean for the second and fourth lines to sort of rhyme? Because there was a really good rhythm about reading aloud the first four lines! :) Short and sweet, keep writing! :) |