I like the whole repetition of the past thing. In fact i really enjoy happy love poems in general, they just get to me.

aw so sweet!very nicely done.

Another beautiful poem! This one was so warm, it made me smile whilst reading it:)The imagry sounds kind of mystical in a way, good job! (this is going on my favourites list)

woah, love't

This is gorgeous and SO sad... *sniffle* The bit I loved, and I mean LOVED, was 'I liked vanilla/you preferred coffee/sometimes we shared one/because we both liked chocolate'It's absolutely beautiful...and that's what you do when you're in love, neh? Share everything! *sigh*

Very nice poem! It makes me wanna have ice cream now XD. Keep writing!

aaww... so cute! if only my life can be like this poem adorable filled with happiness of ice cream lol good work

keep writing!

I think this is my favorite of yours so far besides 'Until Dawn' (which I believe is on my favorites list). This is gorgeous, the wording and imagery are just sparkling with the sun that you describe so magically. Perfectly worded, I love this one.

Hillary

Very unique, and something relatable to the real world, and a common thing couples do in the summer months. Keep up the great work!

Beautiful! I really liked the character's flashback. . .

very beautiful