"Blessed are the lost, for at least they know where they belong.." stunning. I loved every part of this except "blessed are the young people, for they can be patronised.." it seems a bit paradoxical. But really, gorgeous poem, I like it a lot. Shalom.

So true! I love all of this. Wonderful, wonderful.

lol, wow, nice; this is definitely a unique poem, well done!

--K

highly evocative poetry~ nicely done

keep writing!

Sososo true.

::steals the poem and runs::

HA.

simple blunt good