oruku is right. that was anticlimactic. but, i still loved it. totally awesome.

There were nine prisoners. Four girls, three guys

4 + 3 = 9? wtf? unless, the other two were of an indistinguishable gender? or, do i just suck ta math? anyway, SWEET

just wanted to let you know that i really am going to read it but that it's on my "to read soon" list but because of it's length it'll take me a while to get through...i will however review for every chapter i read but unfortunatly it's now 12:45 in the morning so i can't really start it and start reviewing without sounding completly brain dead...which i can be sometimes...anyway, just wait 'til school starts again and i'll start procrastinating again and come read...

AWESOME CHAPTERS!1 :D really. super good. por lil senna. i was wondering what she was up to... ^_^ yay! ok, awesome chapters, i love how they come in like, 7s. you should update soon!

NO CLIF! anyway, awesome story. it makes me laugh how you update. i was on msn, and my alerts go to my msn box. and a thing poops up everytime i get an email. so, for about ten minutes, ihad nothing but little dinging boxes on the right hand side of my desktop. it was making me giggle.

NO CHAMPIGNION IS BAD. he's going to GET her. and it's all a lie. i'm TELLING you! well, that's my hunch. seems too good to be true, you know?

awesome chapter, but, i'm a bit confused. is that gaiz... something dead or not? cause, you said his body was amoung the dead, but then you said he wasnt in the next attack. that's kind of redundant, dont you think? or, was the first bit about his body being with the dead a typo?

OMG! it's so good! i love it! really! really i do! i just, love his name! MUSHROOM OF GRAPEFRUITS but i dont think you put an 's' on the end of pamplemousse to make it plural. it's like sheep. singular is that same as plural. i might be wrong though. but, i just dont think it look right. just, check upon it, kay? ;) anyway, UPDATE SON!

OMG LOL! the mushroom of grapefruits? I LOVE IT! the mushrooms of grapefruits... :D ANYWAY, awesome story, and chapter!