I especially like how you explained the magic of your world. Sorry my previous review was short enough to match your first chapter. Note that it's "manner", not "manor", unless I'm mistaken. Overall, a good chapter with strong, solid basis on culture and magic.

wow. good start. really makes me want to keep reading. unique approach to magic.

post soon!

Most intriguing, especially the style you narrate the story. Very good writing.