I am in love with this! I almost cried! you're awesome!

Peace, fairies, and coffee

Tink

Sweet. A happy faerytale without being too darn sappy.

omg! this is so good. i wish i could write things like this... but i cant. lol. its going into my favorites!

wow.. this is amazing.. i love it... it's so amazing

whoa...holy crap...long poem, love it...wonderful story, great imagery...i love it...lol...i didn't think someone could rhyme for that long...great job, thanks for the story

"And those who are perfect are not so by far But flaws are OK because they're WHO YOU ARE"I LOVE it! The rhytm was forced a bit, and the rhymes sometimes are dogy but on the whole I like it.

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS! I'm so serious, the rhyme was perfect, the story was awesome and inspired. LOVED IT!! Wow! Just wonderful. True there were some parts that could be trimmed to make the umm flow better but still def one of my favs! GREAT piece!!

Wow, that was one long poem, but also one of the better ones I've read from this site in a while. That's just a fact, It's very obvious that you put a lot of work into this, I'm sure that you put a lot of work into it, just to make it rhyme. The rhymes worked 100% throughout almost all the piece, only a few felt forced

She was fine and charming, but her thirteenth year

Was riddled with questions of how she got here

'Here' doesn't sound 100%, it would sound better as there, but then again what could you rhyme with there? Overall, I think it was a really good poem, nice job, this is deff. going on one of my favs. Keep it up!