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| Lilac Ebony 2006-06-26 ch 1,  | abuseI want a man like that. |
| clarinet-alto-4ever 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abuseSo, I searched the title of a poem I just wrote and found yours that had the same title! I think it's interesting how we have the same title to a poem, and yet seperate directions on the actual content of our work. I loved this poem though! It was a nice and sudden surprise when we find out that the speaker hasn't found the guy yet, but she already knows exactly what she's looking for. Keep it up! |
| Morwain 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abuseaw this is so sweet and it made me realize how much i love my boyfriend (he's adorable box of candy on valentines day the works) i really liked this one |
| The Blazing Eclipse 2005-12-21 ch 1, | abusenice story...3rd stanza is like...twice as long as the other stanzas...kinda hard switch...but other than that it's good, i liked how you repeated the first stanza near the end |
| til-iburnout aka Amanda Hel... 2005-12-07 ch 1, | abuseGood, I hope everyone can find their perfect someone. |
| happypills03 2005-11-25 ch 1, | abusefor now ive found my man.. for now key words.. but all we can do is look and love.. good luck finding urs ! |
| Aslan Israel 2005-11-16 ch 1, | abuseI like the irony, of the fact that you haven't found him yet. But you will some day. Nice job on this. |
| BJ Worth 2005-11-08 ch 1, | abuseWell, I don't know if he exists, but some of us are trying. No harm having something to aim for though. I don't know that I would change anything, it read pretty well to me. |
| loyanofviolence 2005-11-07 ch 1, | abuseLike how you described this 'perfect man'. The only thing that bugged me was the arrow dividers, but I'm wierd so pay no attention to me. ♥Staring at the Infamous♥ (The King of the Beautifuls) |