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| Donut prayer 2005-11-08 ch 1,  | abuseVery good, very dark. You might want to think about your rating though and you should think about a sequal i see alot of potential |
| Simplify 2005-11-07 ch 1, | abuseWait... this is a ONEXSHOT? NO!! MAKE A SEQUEL! |