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| The Big Pimpin Pimple 2005-12-20 ch 1, | abuseI really like the way you wrote this poem especially the last line, when you put it in italics...I could almost feel the narrator's jealousy or was it jealousy...who knows well you do okay i'm rambling but this was a good poem i liked it a lotKeep it up! (I'm so original) |
| ketmie 2005-11-08 ch 1, | abuseah. I EFFING LOVE THIS! |
| Ajna 2005-11-07 ch 1, | abuseBittersweet. I liked the rhyme and the way you wrote this. Very emotional. Well done. |