perfect.

love, val

I know that I already reviwed this, but I don't think that I said enough in the other review. This is absolutely amazing. And it's perfect. And I remember you writing this, and how it wasn't a very fun day. But there were great days after this. And I love it. FantasticFantastic, muchomucho bueno, fabulous job!

You hold the answer deep within your own mind Consciously, you've forgotten it That's the way the human mind works Whenever something is too unpleasent Too shameful for us to entertain, we reject it We erase it from our memory But the imprint is always there.

**tear**

Nice! The last two lines were especially beautiful, good job!

That was god and nice,Keep up the good work.

Loved the message behind this poem and the array of words.

My favorite part was the repetition of "somethings last for never."

Great job!

wow... beautiful work!

Yay! It's posted! Well, I think it's beautiful, fantastic job!-Sini