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| Ellerfru 2006-04-30 ch 1, | abuseThis one made me laugh - you are SO right about what's sometimes considered art... The old-fashioned style of language you uses emphasizes the irony of this piece even more. Great poem! *is still laughing* |
| Katterree Fengari 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuselovely, nice rhythm |
| Michael l'oeil fol 2005-12-18 ch 1, | abuseoh yes i was definately right...this is amazing...again great vocab love the archaic tone you start in i used to incorporate that in my tender youth...toiled and tarried...viciously value...lovely alliteration...another fav of mine...great concept too...keep it up MLF |
| LadyRainStarDragon 2005-11-12 ch 1, | abuseFigured myself out? Every time I think I have, I grow again. I really like this poem, I've thought the same thing looking at some of what passes for art today. But even then, what looks like garbage is just the mirror of someone else's soul, is it not. It just takes those two bruch strokes . . . |