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| pixiepoptartz 2006-08-28 ch 1,  | abuseI can really relate to this. : ) Good job |
| SavannahX 2006-01-28 ch 1, | abuseAw. That's so sweet! |
| PerpetualBliss44 2005-11-10 ch 1, | abusevery good, very convincing. it kind of reads like it could be a song. i liked the last part best, that he'd beg her to come back, that he'd miss her. slightly intimidating. nice job |
| Cloudstalker 2005-11-08 ch 1, | abusethis poem is really cool and good, you should totally read my story sometime |
| Searon 2005-11-08 ch 1, | abusewow i realy like this poem. This is exactly how I feel of my ex.. she totally will be sorry one day (:, well keep up the good writing (: |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-11-08 ch 1, | abuseI loved how you put the stages of this relationship in this; that love in the beggining, the obsession for the middle and then the heartbreak and yearning for the end. Its the everyday cycle of the relatioship. Nice work. Juliet. |