|Reviews for Heartbroken Girl|
| kloun mannequin 7/13/11 . chapter 1
the ending is filled with sadness n hate, but I think the starting was cute like every relation from first :)
| Maddiecat 1/21/11 . chapter 1
this is so beautiful, makes me remember how i felt when my boyfriend and i had a nasty break up. so awesome!
| pixiepoptartz 8/28/06 . chapter 1
I can really relate to this. : ) Good job
| SavannahX 1/28/06 . chapter 1
Aw. That's so sweet!
| PerpetualBliss44 11/10/05 . chapter 1
very good, very convincing. it kind of reads like it could be a song. i liked the last part best, that he'd beg her to come back, that he'd miss her. slightly intimidating. nice job
| Cloudstalker 11/8/05 . chapter 1
this poem is really cool and good, you should totally read my story sometime
| CraigAPrice 11/8/05 . chapter 1
wow i realy like this poem. This is exactly how I feel of my ex.. she totally will be sorry one day (:, well keep up the good writing (:
| Faithless Juliet 11/8/05 . chapter 1
I loved how you put the stages of this relationship in this; that love in the beggining, the obsession for the middle and then the heartbreak and yearning for the end. Its the everyday cycle of the relatioship. Nice work.