the ending is filled with sadness n hate, but I think the starting was cute like every relation from first :)

this is so beautiful, makes me remember how i felt when my boyfriend and i had a nasty break up. so awesome!

I can really relate to this. : ) Good job

Aw. That's so sweet!

very good, very convincing. it kind of reads like it could be a song. i liked the last part best, that he'd beg her to come back, that he'd miss her. slightly intimidating. nice job

this poem is really cool and good, you should totally read my story sometime

wow i realy like this poem. This is exactly how I feel of my ex.. she totally will be sorry one day (:, well keep up the good writing (:

I loved how you put the stages of this relationship in this; that love in the beggining, the obsession for the middle and then the heartbreak and yearning for the end. Its the everyday cycle of the relatioship. Nice work.

Juliet.