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Reviews For: Heartbroken Girl

pixiepoptartz
2006-08-28
ch 1,
abuseI can really relate to this. : ) Good job
SavannahX
2006-01-28
ch 1,
abuseAw. That's so sweet!
PerpetualBliss44
2005-11-10
ch 1,
abusevery good, very convincing. it kind of reads like it could be a song. i liked the last part best, that he'd beg her to come back, that he'd miss her. slightly intimidating. nice job
Cloudstalker
2005-11-08
ch 1,
abusethis poem is really cool and good, you should totally read my story sometime
Searon
2005-11-08
ch 1,
abusewow i realy like this poem. This is exactly how I feel of my ex.. she totally will be sorry one day (:, well keep up the good writing (:
Faithless Juliet
2005-11-08
ch 1,
abuseI loved how you put the stages of this relationship in this; that love in the beggining, the obsession for the middle and then the heartbreak and yearning for the end. Its the everyday cycle of the relatioship. Nice work.

Juliet.
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