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| Nacilme 2005-12-24 ch 1,   | this is beautiful. I love to watch the stars so this one is a keeper...good job. |
| black*tears*of*innocence 2005-12-14 ch 1, | Thats so pretty. Its really nice. I love the creative words you used! "sea of shadows" and "water of eternity". This is beautiful and wonderful. definitely a really great poem. great job on this and KW!! ~Davida |
| OneLastEndeavor 2005-12-07 ch 1, | Nice. To me, it gave off a celestial feeling. Good job, keep it up! |
| marshbar960 2005-11-10 ch 1, | very heartfelt! love the metaphors. thanks for sharing and keep writing! p.s. God loves you and so do I! |
| Raquedan 2005-11-07 ch 1, | Kudos for rhyming. I like it, and I'm usually pretty critical about poetry. Just read your profile, got a thing about lawn gnomes, don't you? Thanks for the review, I've actually updated that stupid thing about three times so it shouldn't be that short...oh well. |