*sniffs and wipes eyes* MC... That was beautiful... I don't care what the others say, that was amazing! ^^

Right up my alley, too. And such a good story. Great work. *applause*

Oi... y'know, as rude as it may happen to seem (especially after you gave me such a good review v.v) i just can't lie, and it would be ruder (in my oppinion) to give you the cold-shoulder... so...

I have to say, I really didn't find the story... well... captivating. Didn't really draw me in, or make me want ot read it, so i'm forced to say that i didn't really find it to my liking. sorry :(

Well, I was a bit surprised with the jump, but I think the way things ended up is nice. I'm a bit skeptical about the dad suddenly remorseful over his ways, and becoming a new man, but I guess it could happen.

The wedding, with Zeyh tripping, and the whole camera scene was cool, since it wasn't perfect, but fit in with the characters nonetheless. And I'm glad Ama and Zeyh are happy together in the end. Nice story, congrats on finishing! I always have trouble with that, so I'm doubly impressed :)

I am so glad Ama and Zeyh are together and Ama is away from her abusive father, but it seems tthat their relationship is going a bit fast, emotionally. I mean, for thirteen year olds, emotionally this relationship seems very mature, almost impossibly mature. My brother's 13, and he would more likely look at a kiss and say "yuck" than want to be the one kissing, plus, he'd rather die than cry in front of anyone. Not that this is everyone, just when reading, I am always under the impression Ama and Zeyh are older until I specifically read their ages.

Now, the background info on the brothers was great, Saulo sounds real laid back and cool, but I ike Xavier the best...starring in a horror movie :) Plus, I like the sound of a cute boy who reads. The little expressions with dragonlets are cute, and they do seem like wonderful little critters to have a round, a friendly ear to talk to. Plus, Crista and Damiaan seem cute little friends! Nice chapter

Oh, I really don't like the dad, he has no right, even if he believes he has a reason, to hurt his own child. I think Ama is wise to run away, and I hope this doesn't complicate matters between her and Zeyh though. Damiaan is so cute, and I hope Ama runs to Zeyh's. Good job

The description of Zeyh's mom was nice, and it was clever how you worked in Zeyh's description too through hers, so it didn't sound that like much description at once, but I got a really clear picture of him.

Corin sounds cute, and pretty amazing too, but I was wondering why dragons are least demanding when they're small.

Zeyh and Ama sound so cute together :) And I wish I could go to a roller rink, it sounds so fun, but I've never even heard of one before now! The mom was funny when she picked him up, and I feel bad for Ama...and I hope things look up. Nice chapter!

Lovely story, lovely ending. Great work! You could look to getting it published in a book of short stories, or even as a small novel on it's own... great work. I loved Zeyh tripping, it just made it that much more real than if you'd said 'it all went perfectly' or something.

I was going to wait until I finished Hatching to review, but I had to say that I adored this chapter, and the previous one. The characters are so real, and their personalities so fun. I love the dragons.

Squee, drunk Zeyh and Ama is cute.

I think the whole concept of Drops, Tides, and Flyers is very interesting, and the explanation didn't take away from the start.

Ama and Zeyh both come across well fleshed out, the descriptions of them were nice, but the differences in personality you've started to show really help me start to like them, and get into their stories.

The dragons sound beautiful also, kind of makes me wish I saw them hatch :), and the tension with Ama's worry was well done. It's a good first chapter, and I'll read more as soon as I can. Nice job

OH, MAN!The abuse scene was a bit rushed but you got your point across just the same! And her room says a lot about how she's being treated, that was a good sneaky writing trick. Yay for Ama running away!Good story. Vaguely DRoP, but I'll forgive you. 4.5 stars/5 stars. Keep on keepin' on!

Ah, drunkness. The least-respected-secret-tool for bringing out charrie's true selves. Oh, the kissing was cute. I like Zeyh's mom's little rant near the end. And what's up with Ama's dad? I guess I'll find out in CH 3...

I R&R each chapter as I go, so don't panic :DOK, CH 1 The crying scene by Zeyh felt a mite... forced, shall we say. I like Crista, Damiaan seems very cute, and Ama... Ama's exchange with Damiaan was great. On to CH 2...