I started reading today. And I am hooked
My only concern is where's Tiffany??
She was a fave of mine. Is she coming back?
Or will she never be mentioned again.
Loving the story C=

I just spent my time re-reading this. This is awesomely beautiful and its such a shame it isn't finished. Can you please please please finish or at least just summarize the rest of the story. You may be ** off/annoyed at us readers telling you to finish it but god is it hard to read an amazing story that has you wondering and making up endings that constantly suck. Please update!

it's taken me about 2 days to read this story, but I must say it's brilliant.

at the moment, my favourite character is Justin. I really liked Bryan and Rebecca together though. but now I want to know what's going to happen between Justin and her! :P

I so desperately want Michael to get better! please! poor dude, he's so nice :) i also want to see Rebecca's and his relationship develops!!

Please update soon! pretty please!. your story is officially in my favourites and alerts :)

Oh hun, I love this story. Its very well constructed and no character is left behind. You don't focus on all of them at a time, and thats good because it could make a story looked somewhat clumped.

Its so sad that some dumb person on Xanga plagiarized this, but hey: This means that she did like the story, although only wanted glory for what wasn't theirs.


Kudos for a great story. My sympathies to you.

I knew Tiffany was in love with Eva. Yes! Go me and paying attention. Great story. I can't stop reading it.

I know this is a bit late, and this is my first review, but I feel like sharing my opinion anyway:

#1. What do you think of Tiffany? Rebecca? Gabby? Michael? Bryan? Justin?

Tiffany - pretty awesome and very collected; I like how she is very organized and OCD. Heck, I 'm that way, too.

Rebecca - Very bitchy, but at least she knows what she wants and is not afraid to be honest. I love that.

Gabby - She is very interesting. I like how she looks like a technicolor rainbow. She is totally unique.

Michael - He seems like a typical jock, but that's because I don't know much about him.

Bryan - He sounds very hot, but a bit conceited. I would totally date him if he were real.

Justin - He is my favorite male character because he seems the most calm out of everyone in the group, the most faithful, and definitely the darkest, which I like.

#2. Who’s your favorite character? Why?

Hands down Gabby because she is as experimental with fashions as I am. She is also as weird as I am. She also loves animals, which is another trait that I share with her.

#3. Least favorite character? Why?

This is a hard one, but I don't really dislike any of the characters except for the sophomore girls that get on the elevator with Tiffany. They seem like small-minded idiots.

#4. Who do you think would make the best couple? Why?

Tiffany and Eva because Tiffany seems to only love Eva, and I noticed how she looked very sad when she stared at the picture of the two of them.

#5. Worst couple? Why?

I definitely cannot see Bryan and Tiffany together because they would be the typical "We look good, so we will be good together" couple. Bryan is probably only interested in her for her good looks while Tiffany really doesn't seem to give a damn.

#6. What is it about this story that keeps you reading it?

Just how it reminds me of one of my favorite cartoons, 6teen. There aren't too many similarities between the stories, but I notice that there are three guys and three girls in them and how each person has a different personality and hangs out with each other. I also like your writing style and how you give very good character descriptions. The story as a whole is excellent, really.

A very good story. Really well-written plot, personally I have no clue how you can keep up with so many characters and who is sleeping with who! (Whom? Never understood...)

It took me a couple chapters to really understand all the drama of these friends, because how often in real life does this really happen anyway?, but you put it together really nicely. Very creative storyline. The only thing is the many simple errors that occur, like you would forget a "r" there or repeat words.

As I finished Chapter 39, I realized you haven't updated in...three years? Writer's block? I hope it ends soon, I know many people are wishing for the best for the six!

}:-)HWTC

I've been reading the story for the past 6 hours and I just had to stop to review. It's so entertaining! Gabrielle reminds me of an old friend, possibly the only person who made me act silly. Rebecca is well-written too, and the guys all have well-defined personalities. You have a knack for indirect characterisation.

However, I can't help but find the repetitive descriptions. The way you mentioned that Michael resembles Shane West in almost every chapter so far is grinding. The same goes for Tiffany's looks, normal behaviour and speech patterns, Gabby's childishness and Rebecca's chameleonic traits. Like my editor would say, show and don't tell. And if you must tell, don't repeat it. Honestly, you're so good at making your characters jump off the page through what they do, and making them such distinct personalities, that there was no need to come out and describe them in so many words.

Other than that (and it's a pet peeve, so I was bound to look for it) the story is wonderful and your writing truly entertaining.

I'm off to bed, but I'll come back and review after I finish reading the whole thing. Looking forward to it!

- Laura

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wow, awesome story! love the drama, and all the characters, of course. I mean, its so rare to find a story with even one character with a personality, and your has like a gazillion. (totally not sure if that is a number, but who cares) Anyway, its hilarious, has a point, and basically touches on like every single teen issue out there. Oh, and another thing about the characters (which I totally love, in case you haven't noticed) is that even when they are making stupid mistakes and ruining each others lives, I can't hate them. Its impossible to hate people when they have a good reason for the things they do. Oh, and I hope for more Gabby in the future! She is a hilarious comic relief, and comic relief characters are my favorite.

HELLO!
PLEASE UPDATE.
IT'S BEEN 2 YEARS, WOMAN.
I'M DYING HERE.

you really don't know the difference between "it's" and "its?" one is possessive. the other is a contraction. i don't know, but it doesn't seem like you learned that in elementary school. the other problem is your obsession with apostrophes, especially when it's something like "who's" when it's really supposed to be "whose." (you don't know possessive? really?) even though you're an accomplished writer, it pains me to have to point these out.

last thing: i'm going to write the last paragraph with every single apostrophe inserted wrong. let's see how nice that looks.

your really don't know the difference between it's and it's? one is possessive. the other is a contraction. i don't know, but it seem's like you did not learn that in elementary school. the other problem is your obsession with apostrophe's, especially when its something like "who's" when its really supposed to be "whose." (you don't know possessive? really?) even though your an accomplished writer, it pain's me to have to point these out.

i'm pretty sure it's "exception," not acceptation. also, you like to use "it's" in the place of "its" (the possessive form of objects). i hope someone else has mentioned this from all the reviews you've gotten. it's been bothering me how acceptation is the "usual, accepted meaning of a word; approval." an exception is like the only thing contrary to most beliefs or processions (which is the word you're aiming for). anyway, your story is still really good, but i just wanted to point out those 2 grammar tidbits. hopefully you'll keep them in mind please.

DAMN IT!
UPDATE SOON!!
IT'S BEEN 2 FREAKING YEARS!

I'm having a bad case of bryan-justin-michael withdrawal.

Please.

OH MY GOD.
The ** is all over the place.
Everyone wants Becca.
I thought she was in love with Bry?
Gawd.
Drama.