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| Jesse the Storyteller 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseI'm glad you clarified that this was about a cat bceause it sounds so much like it's about a baby left on someone's doorstep. "I think I need another thousand photos To remember you by Before we put you back in your box And bury you" I love that stanza. I like how the beginning of the poem and the ending go together. This is a really sad poem. :( I can hear your emotions in it. I'm sorry you have to lose your baby. :( -Jesse Behold the review marathon (link in profile) |
| Harlan Phoenix 2007-05-09 ch 1, | abuseAw, sad. Losing pets can be tough. I like the structure of the stanzas...it really is a fine poem. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2006-08-07 ch 1, | abuse:( you know, this made me cry. a few months ago- bahahaha, this is, so pathetic- I lost my beloved guinea pig, and, yeah, this hit home. nicely done. |
| alicesun 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abuseIntensely heartbreaking, especially since I know exactly what you're going/went through. |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-11-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is so sad; I have kind of the same situation. I was really young when I got my first cat and she's lasted with me through the years and I can't even imagin what it will be like when she starts to die. Keep up the good work, and I'm so sorry that this is happening to you. Juliet. |