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Jesse the Storyteller
2008-04-19
ch 1,
abuseI'm glad you clarified that this was about a cat bceause it sounds so much like it's about a baby left on someone's doorstep.

"I think I need another thousand photos
To remember you by
Before we put you back in your box
And bury you"

I love that stanza. I like how the beginning of the poem and the ending go together.

This is a really sad poem. :( I can hear your emotions in it. I'm sorry you have to lose your baby. :(

-Jesse
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Harlan Phoenix
2007-05-09
ch 1,
abuseAw, sad. Losing pets can be tough. I like the structure of the stanzas...it really is a fine poem.
wordsworth in a garbage can
2006-08-07
ch 1,
abuse:( you know, this made me cry. a few months ago- bahahaha, this is, so pathetic- I lost my beloved guinea pig, and, yeah, this hit home. nicely done.
alicesun
2006-02-06
ch 1,
abuseIntensely heartbreaking, especially since I know exactly what you're going/went through.
Faithless Juliet
2005-11-08
ch 1,
abuseThis is so sad; I have kind of the same situation. I was really young when I got my first cat and she's lasted with me through the years and I can't even imagin what it will be like when she starts to die. Keep up the good work, and I'm so sorry that this is happening to you.

Juliet.
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