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| alittlebitabsurd 2005-11-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseLove your punctuation and paranthases, especially in this one. |
| ancient trees 2005-11-11 ch 1,  | abuseThis is so amazingly beautiful. I'm speachless. What in the world is there to say? There just aren't enough adjectives lovely enough to even begin to describe this gorgeous poem. Intense love. 'once again i long for her, falling again & drowning (forever?)' was my favourite line, but it was so very hard to choose just one! |
| smile persephone 2005-11-08 ch 1, | abuseLovelovelove the style and use of parentheses. Beautiful use of diction and imagery. Every line is utterly amazing. My only qualm is that you didn't put a space after your commas and the word following it (though perhaps it was intentional). |
| Ajna 2005-11-08 ch 1, | abuseWonderful imagery.. I like how it was short but so full of description and emotion. Well done. |