This is the cutest story i've ever read. seriously. especially the Tabby Cat thing...

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This a wonderful story, I like it alot. You are a very good writer. Characters are very nice also, pardon my language for english isn't my first.

cute.

I love this story too! The 'I love you' at the end is like a signature for your stories, I like it. I can't wait to read the other stories.

Petals was an amazing story and I can tell that this story will be just as amazing. You're an amazing author and I really can't wait to read more :)

Another winner! I loved it!

Well this was a funny and good story. Certainly more lighthearted than Petals...or dare i say more mad? Those two are two extraordinary characters, likeable and funny. funny that i read ma madmoiselle bizarre before this one. A good story, i liked it very mad...err much!^^

Aw that was so sweet! I love Melvins character his cheekiness and humour are so endearing. I loved the first one and i didnt realise there were more stories so i was so glad when i found your account again Cant wait to read the other stories in the series!

great story!

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I loved this story of your as well but it was for purely different reasons than why I loved Petals.

I loved this one so much because I loved Melvin. He was hilarious and charming and just generally jovial. He was a really great character to read and I assume that you must have had heaps of fun writing him as well. He is certainly amazing.

I quite liked Tabby's brother as well because even though he could be an ass sometimes, he was a considerate ass especially because he was generally just looking out for his sister which was really sweet.

Anyway, loved this story as much as I loved the others.

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great story! it was so fun to read. lol i just love melvin, he's like the funniest character here :D

hi,
Really enjoying the story so far, only up to chapter 11 currently.

Just wanted to mention, without sounding like a complete prat, that in chapter eleven the use of a comforter is mentioned.
Thought you might like to know that comforters are generally referred to as duvets [slang: covers] in England.

sorry if i sound a bit snobby, its hard for me to write something slightly useful without sounding like a twat.

I am enjoying the story immensely.
thanks.

Melvin is amazing. I love how you made him. He's so funny & witty, it's great. Probably one of my favorite characters on fictionpress!
And the story is very cute - loved it so much.

ahh nice work! bright one that Melvin is.

a little problem... melvin has a changed last name from petals to this.