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| choking on your words again 2007-09-08 ch 1, | i loved this poem it was sad and thanksfor all the review on my poems i apperciat it |
| Kaitlyn J. Richards 2007-07-16 ch 1, | I really like this. especially the lines "Fading shadows dance in the emptiness, Memories, playing there games. I am alone again.. The house is nothing but shadows, and you’ll never come home again." thought the "there" should be a "their". anyway, great work :] |
| braindead1345 2006-08-03 ch 1, | THanks for the review! what was interesting? anyways,great poem,i felt the confusion,and sadness in it.. |
| Daho Kitsune 2005-11-15 ch 1, | Wow, nice poem, I couldn't do something like that if I tried XD lol (though there were a few spelling and grammer errors) And thanks for your review on Moonlight DM, I really appreciate it ^^ |