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Reviews For: Dust in the wind moving again

choking on your words again
2007-09-08
ch 1,
i loved this poem
it was sad
and thanksfor all the review
on my poems i apperciat it
Kaitlyn J. Richards
2007-07-16
ch 1,
I really like this.
especially the lines "Fading shadows dance in the emptiness, Memories, playing there games.

I am alone again..

The house is nothing but shadows, and you’ll never come home again."

thought the "there" should be a "their".
anyway, great work :]
braindead1345
2006-08-03
ch 1,
THanks for the review! what was interesting? anyways,great poem,i felt the confusion,and sadness in it..
Daho Kitsune
2005-11-15
ch 1,
Wow, nice poem, I couldn't do something like that if I tried XD lol

(though there were a few spelling and grammer errors)

And thanks for your review on Moonlight DM, I really appreciate it ^^
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