I like the romance in this, you described it well so that it didn't sound like lust, but instead sounded like two people expressing their deep feelings for each other.

This is a sweet little poem with such simplistics that flow genuinely. The imagery is hard to miss, even harder so with the core emotions played within each line. And by the end of the poem it gives a different perspective than the original opening, giving deeper feeling to the whole piece. It ties together that harmonious feeling of completion enacted, sharing that blissful feeling of afterglow with the reader not only personally as if we're experiencing as you, but personally as you're experiencing it yourself. A very nice ending touch to a wonderful poem.