ok i read your poem and it's awsome most ppl say yea that's cool i do that and then you see them being just like the rest, it's sad.

ppl don't understand that it's more than just "fitting in" that's happening it's being hollow with nothing inside no original thought and so.

also i read your profile someone FINALLY gets it that being goth is more than wearing converse and a black-T and eyeliner! i'm goth and i kno that it's what's in there, inside you that makes you 'goth' if you really need to lable.it's aggravating if i saw i'm goth they think i'm some drug dealer and so on ppl can be so stareotipical (can't spell it)

yep and most ppl think that rock bands are blink 182, good charolette, green day,when actually they're not they're mainstream and after billy joe pulling that nude concert, saying 'i am your god' when he actually believes it and ** like that that should be telling you something right there-also if you like any of those bands IGNORE my last comment cuz i don't want to affend you.

btw thanks for reviewing and if you don't hate thnx 4 putting up w/ my rambeling.

i wish u luck on your writing!

hey! first of all thanks a lot for ur reviews, im really glad that ur likin my work, it makes me feel better if some1 actually likes it. lol i will keep writing and update as soon as. lolne way bk 2 this poem the reason i actually read it was coz u dont hav ne reviews for it, plus it sounded gd so u no. its really gd i enjoyed readin it so keep up the gd work! katie x