Uh, this isn't really funny to people who have actually tried suicide... Haha, I kinda like it though... Bloody noses are what loser nerds get... LOL! No offence...

Aww...I really wished that you didn't put the whole bleeding-nose thing at the end, it really spoils the flow. But the humor was really good, lol. This is really well written.

Lol, good one! Reminds me of me, because I would be the one to make such a fuss about a bleeding nose just for kicks...great job, lol, it really made me laugh in the end! Love, Mia

Short, and the ending just seemed to lack a good "finish," but it was fairly good. For some reason the flow was a bit wacky, but it's still emotion-filled and yachta yachta. (You must know what I was going to say since I've reviewed you so many times!)

Well, thanks for the review to Short Vampire Stories. Been up for a while, but you're the first to review it. Yeow. Well, much appreciation over here!

it was getting good till the end :p

*Smile* That was good. I liked it a lot. _

hehe cute! I love it! i'm waiting for caprcorn thats me so can't wait for you to get it up! I really like this poem it really sounded like you were talking bout how someone slit their writ or something. Great job as alwayslove you forever and always Dee

Ok, that was pretty good.

Wow, this is excellent! *applaudes*, thank you very much for sharing! Write on! _

Anna