Awesome! I like it alot, shows a very confused demon? Lol, hehe, I like it, keep it up!

Take care.♪Willow Wildfire♪

that would really make an excellent song.. it flows so perfectly.. its brilliant! i love it! cool piece!

-llazuli-

I Love your writing, its so...i cant think of the word - inspirational?Anyway, its really excellent.

have a look at my work sometime, id like to know what other think of it.

DEFINATELY SOMETHING SERIOUS. I really liked this piece...keep up your good work. *_*

I love this!Just flows together, and yes I could imagine this as a good song.

To the favourties this goes.

Negasi

Classic Trick-That was classic good. If you wanted to, you could get that set to hard rock music, but that's beside the point. It was /awesome/, it's going in my favvies. You're the first.Happy future writing-MC the Broken One