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| rust phoenix 2007-03-01 ch 1,  | abuseThis is a beautiful piece, you have a way with words. The emotion is expressed very well and I love the overall mood to this; it's very melancholy but also hopeful at the end. My only complaint is that there were a few minor grammar and spelling errors. |
| Needa S 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuseVery nice, well done. |
| not sure yet 2005-11-13 ch 1, | abuseaw, it's sweet and sad, i rather like it, muchly nicely written, well done |
| Gabriel Lyman 2005-11-09 ch 1, | abusei don't see the title correllation with the actual poem but other then those semantics, i like the actual poem. |