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| Sally-andersonn 2005-11-19 ch 1,   | Funny. I like the whole deep and meanigfuls ide of it. I think it means that war isn't for real people. anyway, This poem is actually inerpretable. I praise you for that! |
| windinthewires 2005-11-13 ch 1, | Brilliant! |
| Bittersweet Berry 2005-11-10 ch 1, | Ari, this is very meaningful. What the mainstream culture today is promoting is disgusting. They shouldn't do that. It's vile, vulgur and stupid. This really is meaningful. Tomorrow is Remembrance Day. Lest we Forget the soldiers that died for us so many years ago. Respects. |
| Bittersweet Scenery 2005-11-09 ch 1, | This was really well written. It reminds me of childhood when every boy wishes to be this person, a fake. Shows the heart of mankind and that no one is perfect. |
| Ajna 2005-11-09 ch 1, | Very, very well done. I absolutely love how well this flows and the ending, especially. I thought it was going to be an actual compare/contrast piece, but this is better. Great poem. |
| hailstar 2005-11-09 ch 1, | well, i'm, not afraid of anything. does that count?~hail |