i like this haiku. I's agree w/ what BJWorth said, but there's one thing wrong w/ it. the first line should be 5 sylables, the second line should be 7 sylables, and the third line should be 5 sylables. instead, yours was: first line 5 sylables, which is right, but then the second line was 8 sylables, and the third line was 6 sylables. make sure you keep that in mind next time. other than that, though, i liked it! ~Wintertigress

O, now there's a Haiku. Love the nature connection, the Japanese would be proud.

interesting concept.

wonderful. absolutly amazing. nice job!

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