 tornangelwings 2007-01-24 . chapter 6this is really good, i like it alot you should really keep going. |
 jojoann 2006-07-04 . chapter 6 update please? if you can? :) |
 Dustbunnys13 2006-05-10 . chapter 6Short is okay no matter if it's short story or short chapter. Can't wait for more. |
 Kylie1403 2006-05-10 . chapter 6im really really enjoying this story! its kick ** |
 whateva123 2006-05-09 . chapter 6update soon n not after so many weks.bye |
 confusedpyroangel 2006-05-09 . chapter 6This is really good! Please add more soon...okiday? |
 Ms.Romantic 2006-05-09 . chapter 6cute |
 Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2006-04-30 . chapter 1Cool! I really like this! Wanna see my first story? Sorry about that. I really like this! It's a sad yet beautiful story! |
 SolisLuna 2006-04-29 . chapter 5Awesome chapter, and great story so far! Update again soon please! |
 cherrie.. 2006-04-29 . chapter 5 wow this sounds like a nice piece.. pleasee update quickly.. adam and lore;)sounds cute.. |
 whateva123 2006-04-29 . chapter 5hi please update soon.bye |
 lamlam 2006-04-28 . chapter 5cool story...=] plz update soon! |
 whateva123 2006-04-28 . chapter 4please do continue different than the other stories ive read in fictionpress.bye |
 Kylie1403 2006-04-28 . chapter 5lovedit? is she gonna get with adam |
 Dustbunnys13 2006-03-15 . chapter 4me like! |