|Reviews for the toast to cannibals|
| punctured.lungs 7/31/11 . chapter 1
lovely. the breaking of "attraction" is well-done.
| AboveTheSalt 12/10/05 . chapter 1
i've read this before but it just struck me now to review it. i really like this a lot - the way you're so vague leaves a lot to the imagination with strategically placed words. lovelovelove "come one come all" from there out. in the "tongue chewing" stanza, though, i think the word "shoes" could be replaced with something a bit more descriptive: stilettoes, perhaps? horror indeed.
| Jezsh 12/7/05 . chapter 1
| agentprovacateur 11/28/05 . chapter 1
i love the first little blurb. it reminds me so much of this girl i know...love it :)
| White Tea and Ginger 11/22/05 . chapter 1
Toes crossing within shoes..gave me the shivers.
| twenty-second seduction 11/22/05 . chapter 1
std attraction? wonderful.
| breakdown in the waiting room 11/18/05 . chapter 1
I love this. Sure, it deviates from the norm quite a bit, style and theme wise, but I still feel like I understand it, like I know it. It grabs you somehow, with this dirty underlying tone and it simply commands attention. You have a lovely knowledge of words and your vocabulary and use of it is always excellent.
| MadBrilliant 11/16/05 . chapter 1
liking the style and vocabulary. I don't get that last phrase "&theirmechanism is."
| addie pray 11/11/05 . chapter 1
I love this. Flashy machinery. Favourite lines - from (seize the day)on.
| GypsyMothra 11/11/05 . chapter 1
Another wonderful piece of work from you. :)
| lackluster 11/10/05 . chapter 1
i love the "come one come all" carnival feel to this. a very interesting poem...
| HauntedMisery 11/9/05 . chapter 1
| poetic abortion 11/9/05 . chapter 1
I love you.
seriously, this rocked my ... err-it was beyond amazing. ( . .phrase.) the whole thing is powerful, shiver inducing and Halloweenesque throughout its entirity. love, love, LOVE everything in this poem. really, can't descide. you leave me feeling dumb.
did I mention I love you?
| Faithless Juliet 11/9/05 . chapter 1
Powerful piece! I took away from it that its about the ways that we personally destroy ourselves: We fuck until we're diseased. We drink intil our insides give out. Again powerful piece.