wow... I am speechless (it's a good thing I'm typing then ^^). You are seriously a REALLY GOOD WRITER. You have potential to publish a really good book. It's like, when I read your stories, you're talking to me, narrating from your character's point of view. I don't get any pretentious airs from your work. I think that's the sign of a true artist. Keep writing and more power!

God bless-mistressKC