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| Osunale 2006-03-17 ch 1,  | abuseYou are fantastic. A mix of bold beauty and subtle posings of ideas come across consistently in your work, and this poem is no exception. I can hardly bring myself to stop reading this. |
| Lucid Nonsense 2006-02-24 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, interesting & great diction. |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2005-12-01 ch 1, | abuseWow, another amazing poem. I love the last 3 stanzas. Just something about them. Keep writing! :) |
| Cyssel 2005-11-29 ch 1, | abuseNothing new, but well executed. Liked the short lines. |
| Pink Sparrow 2005-11-27 ch 1, | abuseLove the last two lines. Love the whole poem. Nice work. |
| ExiledRain 2005-11-17 ch 1, | abuseI got some wonderful imagry from this, but it might just be the product of reading poetry while sleep deprived. Nevertheless, it was enjoyable to read. I liked it, and hope you will continue writing. -exile(and thanks for the review) |
| T. Rowland 2005-11-13 ch 1, | abusethis is very thought provoking, excellently worded and enticing to read. it keeps your attention intensified. the vision created with your words stays with me and is worth remembering. beautiful. |
| sunday night sky 2005-11-13 ch 1, | abusei like the description and the language structure. v cryptic =) keep writing |
| Unready 2005-11-12 ch 1, | abusecryptic, as alwyas |
| cmetalangel249 2005-11-12 ch 1, | abuseDoesn't it seem that sometimes,the whole world speaks another language than yourself...and they lack eyes to see whats so blatantly on your face? A+ for putting into words what I can't,and for your own eloquence. |
| Aquafied 2005-11-10 ch 1, | abusebut couldnt we all say we are misread and miserunderstood.to hold a butter knife and be indicted for murder. we could all hide behind masks and acuse, but then life wouldnt be so grand. a more eloquent piece.its divine. |
| citrus scented 2005-11-10 ch 1, | abusewow this is quite cryptic, but when you step back and look at the big picture the impression of it is clear. very thought-provoking and the descriptions and choice of wording is just mind blowing. "wipe away the frownsof self-doubt with a sweepingun-punctuatedsentence"- love that. |
| Kat-Renee Kittel 2005-11-09 ch 1, | abuseVery intriguing imagery. I like the line, "How much of what he says is translatable?" (Although my husband and I both speak the same language, he speaks British and I speak American. Makes a difference in understanding each other.) Write more please... |
| BJ Worth 2005-11-09 ch 1, | abuseI like the description in this one, especially the part where you describe the guy as a really well dressed guy. |