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| Drewfiend 2007-08-16 ch 1, | abuseooh- nice ending. A very creative and original story. |
| Scarecrow's Lady 2006-01-18 ch 1, | abuse"Lucifer works for me I guess. Morning Star is such a ** mouthful" I'm sorry. I had to laugh! But the best part was the end... it was very creepy... I don't know. And I liked the idea that God comes down as a bum on Main Street. It kind of reminded of that song by Brave Saint Saturn or by that other weepy guy... oh... I can't remember his name... oh well... I really liked how you brought out great truths but with humour added! It really is inspiring! I'm glad you've found an audience! |
| kylie leo 2006-01-13 ch 1, | abuseA fantastic read and highly original in my opinion. Well rounded conversation that really caught my attention and kept me reading. I'll have to read more of your work. Cassie |
| Redeemed 2006-01-12 ch 1, | abuseBravo! That was extremely entertaining. Short and to the point. You have a great knack for conversations--capturing the witty part that a lot of writers tend to leave out. I like the devil's nonchalant nature, and the Hitler tidbit was great. Overall it was a fun read. I'll have you marked for the future. |
| moonlight-dragon3 2005-11-10 ch 1, | abuseoo I like the idea... very cool. This looks interesting and i hope there will be more. a little more description would be nice about the characters though.. but hey all good! |