wow, awesome structure, i love it!

-K

Algebra 2 eh? I'm in Algebra 1 at the moment. lol. I hate math.

Anyway, Short but has a lot of meaning. I can't really explain what I get from it, but I had to think about it for a moment.

ANNA

I really like this.

I really like this! I like your wording- it's very original and personal. I like that in poems.

i love the way you have written 'my precious girl'... very original. nice work.

last line is like...whoa...