This one is my favourite of your poems I've read so far, and possible my favourite poem ever, Once again, you've written so beautifully here, beautiful in a dark, morbid way. I love the ending so much, it kind of reminds me of the HIM song, 'join me in death'. This really is amazing writing. You are extremely talented. x

Very nice work! I like your wording and the story in this piece. good job; keep it up!

a romeo and juliet...beautifully written, the visuals are clear and you described emotion well; bravo!

--K