Reviews for The Home Strech - FictionPress.com

artificial destiny 2008-05-14 ch 1,	abusehow true :) i remember a quote (not sure from where) that said something along the lines of life's greatest failures are those who gave up without realizing how close they've been to succeeding. so yeah. never give up -artificial destiny r.r back?
There-will-always-be-someth... 2006-07-04 ch 1,	abuseVery inspirational. There are many people out there who are failing at tasks because of giving up, and not trying. This poem tells me that if you try hard enough you will get your just reward. If you don't, you won't go anywhere. Nice poem.
XLavenderX 2006-03-26 ch 1,	abuseHey, thank you for reviewing my story...so i thought i'd return the fav. with one of my reviews to you. This is a really nice peice. Very inspiring indeed. Hmm more people should read this.
ice flyer 2005-11-23 ch 1,	abuseInspiring little piece of writing, good job. I like the ideas and the thought behind it, and the beginning was a good grabbing idea. I noticed you repeated "leg" a lot, though. Also I noticed some typos and stuffs. Anyways..it doesn't really matter because it's the thought that counts. Good job :)
Faithless Juliet 2005-11-10 ch 1,	abuseI like it; it has a good mood to it, uplifting but not pushy (you know what I mean?) Good job, keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet.