|Reviews for Fire|
| An Inside Joke 11/13/05 . chapter 1
Good start, but the last line was a bit redundant.
| Zefskiy 11/10/05 . chapter 1
I like it, except for the fact that you used the word 'inside' twice.
| Smoky Bear 11/10/05 . chapter 1
like writing! very nice, well done
| Surfing Dog 11/10/05 . chapter 1
Very true. Keep this up:o)
| sunday night sky 11/10/05 . chapter 1
nice work :) keep writing