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| dreamforever101 2008-04-25 ch 8, anon. | abuseaww I loved the 10 questions game.. it worked really well in leading up to the date! |
| pbep2 2008-04-24 ch 7,  | abusei actually did squeal, that's not good cuz i have strep haha. |
| notreal17 2008-04-09 ch 16, | abusethis story reminds me of my friend and her boyfriend. he has lots of family problems but it all seems to go away when he is with her. although it does get annoying with them all over each other all the time, it is kinda cute |
| atreyu love 2008-04-06 ch 2, | abusehis little sister is so cute! |
| SparklingStar25 2008-03-19 ch 25, | abuseThis is amazing!I love this story..cant wait to read the sequel!! |
| SweetDenial 2008-03-17 ch 25, | abusegreat story I loved it. Off to read the sequel nexT! Great job. :) |
| ilovejonas22 2008-03-16 ch 25, anon. | abuse*sniff* but Trent and Laila are meant to be with each other DAMMIT! :( oh crapskies theres a sequel!? i just,like, saw that rite now...haha um well i shall read the sequel first then...before i blow up like that...well anyway! AWESOME STORY! *claps* |
| Genato 2008-02-16 ch 25, | abuselove it. gonna read the sequel tomorrow. cliche and/but good. love the ending. it's perfect even if it made me sad. coz it was bound to happen. |
| Hopelessly Clueless 2008-02-05 ch 3, | abuseI've read your story, and the sequel! But I can read this story over and over again!! I just love the way they meet! You did a GREAT job!! I love it! :D |
| LoneRanger 2008-01-30 ch 25, anon. | abuseWow! Incredible story. I really, really liked it. From the characters to the plot. It was quite simplistic and didn't have these complicated twists and problems that can be a bit cliché. I cried some, especially during the beating and shooting and during this last chapter. I can't wait to read the sequel! Thank you! |
| Mary's.Song 2008-01-27 ch 26, | abuseOkay that was just mean. I come here looking for a happy ever after cliche and you give me REALITY! Rude. LOL. Anyway, I will be reading the sequel and you better give me my happy ever after! It was really great! |
| pretitiful 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseoh i love this story. i haven't finished it but i'm almost there. i cannot wait till i read the sequel. i really like Trent and i think he's a great guy. nice story. =) |
| Pandabear93 2008-01-07 ch 25, | abuseThat is sad TT^TT that almost made me cry T^T love it! XD im going 2 read ur sequel right...now(in like 5 mins) XD -fav- |
| Zi 2008-01-04 ch 5, anon. | abuseMan! I love this site! I can like, freakin' connect to everyone in these stories! Laila in denial that the guy likes her, guy that acts so obviously... and, I can't describe his personality. But this Trent guy... he's sounding pretty darn amazing... These people are exactly like my friends. |
| freesia001 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abuseThen I might point out that you wouldn’t have FALLEN if I hadn’t RUN into you |