|Reviews for Making Him Notice|
| cheekymonkey2772 8/18/07 . chapter 25
Omg, this chapter had my eyes pouring out with tears, I don't think i've cried this ,much before except when someone pasted away. Thank you so much for this story...Absolutely fabulous...So glad its not the end of Laila and Trent's relationship...can't wait for the sequel...when will it be finished by?...Just wanna thank you again for this amazing story...
| cheekymonkey2772 8/18/07 . chapter 20
OMG, I was crying when I read this chapter...so sad...really good
| You Really Think Im Listening 8/17/07 . chapter 9
That's so sweet! -swoons-
| Spinning Lights 8/14/07 . chapter 14
jaja i would be so embarrassed if i said that to my boyfriend. but i guess it worked out for her. ]
| AJS 8/14/07 . chapter 1
Okay. So what i was going to say is this. I'm confused about Ryan, because I thought that earlier on in this story he said that ever since he went to a different high school, he, Laila, and Danielle haven't really talked much... but then later on in the story he appears at their high school like he's been attending there all along.
And the other thing is Laila's mom's last name. Wouldn't she be using her maiden name since she got divorced, so her last name wouldn't be Stallings still, like Laila? Also, another thing about Laila's family, that actually pertains to the sequel but I just remember now... if Laila's mom got remarried 3 years before Trent came back, but Laila and Trent only stopped talking 2 years before he came back, wouldn't he have known that they got remarried? And that Laila's mom was pregnant because Brianna was 2 years old, so she was in Kristen's stomach while they were still talking?
I think it's that timeline thing again T_T But I love your stories, and I love Laila & Trent together :) I'll be looking out for your next story!
| atreyu love 8/14/07 . chapter 1
| Midnight Artist 8/14/07 . chapter 3
This is one of those cliche's that can only be considered unique still, when written by a great writer... like oyu!
| Midnight Artist 8/14/07 . chapter 1
I like it already!
| AJS 8/14/07 . chapter 25
Oh I like how you connected the end of this one with the beginning of the next, which I'm definitely looking forward to now that it's all over. So the perfect couple broke up, huh? God, I can feel the tears in my throat right now, it's so damn sad :( It's amazing and I never really thought much about it before but all it takes is that much distance for a couple so perfect as Trent & Laila to be broken up. It really sucks when you think of it that way. Stupid airports. I've learned to hate them lately.
There were a few things that I was confused about in this story though. First you said that Trent's middle name was Daniel, but then later you said it was Colin or something. Just wondering which is it. Another thing I was confused about was his birthday. I think it was when they first got together or something and Trent said he was turning 17 in a month, which should have been January or something, but then came Christmas and he said he was turning 18 in September and he was already 17... so I'm confused. I'm also confused about the timing for the first part of their relationship. Like was it late November or early December when they first got together? It seemed like more time should have passed but I'm not sure. I guess the whole timing thing was driving me up the walls because I always like to pay attention to that sort of thing.
All in all though, good job. This was a cute story and it's strange because even though the ending is sad, it FITS, which is very uncommon with a lot of other stories that you see around. Good job! Keep up the good work! I've been meaning to read this for a while since it seems to pop up everywhere, but I was so reluctant to do so because I can't stand sad endings T_T Oh well. As long as there is a sequel :)
| DiddlingFiddles 8/12/07 . chapter 1
| Delayed Flight 8/10/07 . chapter 25
Oh, I loved it so much, I'm just thankful I read the summary of "Goodbye is the beginning" before reading this because I was prepared for an ending of this sort since the first chapter, if I hadn't I would be devastated! Anyway, I LOVE Laila, she's such a great character. I'm off to read the sequel!
| Delayed Flight 8/10/07 . chapter 3
Ah, 3 chapters and I'm already 100% hooked!
| GANGSTAR 7/27/07 . chapter 25
this was a beautiful story and it was very well written. i shall read the sequel
| ayoo marie 7/27/07 . chapter 1
I just finished reading this story, this morning.
I loved it, going to read the sequel now
| S.W.A.G 7/20/07 . chapter 25
good story i was hooked from chapter 1