Reviews for Making Him Notice
Brown-Eyed Chocoholic 3/30/11 . chapter 2
Una. Cool name, BTW. It means first in Filipino. :)

I wonder where Trent was watching her. He's interested in her already. Woot!

This story reminds me so much of my favorite stories. It's like a mix of everything. :D

I am so glad that I found this on ADoR.
Brown-Eyed Chocoholic 3/30/11 . chapter 1
I knew right away that Delia was Trent's li'l sister. :D These things happened a lot on FP stories.

Anyway, I like the story so far. Mitchell seems like a great guy. Too bad that he'll probably get his heart broken.
MuffinsRoxSox 3/30/11 . chapter 25
That is so...heartbreaking. I really shouldn't have read this before school. Don't want to go in with red eyes now... Overall, this story was awesome. :) I thought it was great. Well, got to go. Amazing job. :)
MissCiya 3/28/11 . chapter 25
I meanrewriting
Ms Violet 3/22/11 . chapter 26
I love your story, thank you so much for writting it. The ending made me cry a but :)

Can't wait to read the sequel

Ever faithful

Ms Violet
Kelly Rogala 2/22/11 . chapter 25
Just wanted to say thanks! Thanks for making me cry what the heck! Great story either way and when I finished reading this I was super happy that the sequel was already up because that would of sucked if I had to wait :) I'm not a very patient person lol. Great job again!
callmecoolene 2/16/11 . chapter 25
I feel empty and alone. It's been a while that a story on here has made me fall in love and cry. Thanks for doing that :')
cosmetgirl 2/5/11 . chapter 4
Amazing
jorie 1/8/11 . chapter 25
i love this fic..

the characters were all lovable...

except for shane though..

trent andd laila are adorable..

i love their story...

it was sad what happened to una.. but i see that it was necessary in the next chapters ahead..

i kinda had the feeling she'd be gone coz of what she made laila promise to do..

but it was still sad..

i enjoyed this wonderful fic!

great job!

off to go read the sequel )
HookedonFic2 1/5/11 . chapter 5
I really like Ryan, he seems such a nice friend! :-))
HookedonFic2 1/5/11 . chapter 2
Good story! :-)
Elishar 1/1/11 . chapter 12
I was really touched by this chapter - eitrely of course with the "You are so innocent" part. It's sweet and I like it. Though, it's a little funny that I was reading that part with the song "The Star-Spangled Banner" as my background! Thanks to my cousin who got too bored and decided to play it out of nowhere. Anyway it was till good.
xButterflyKisses 12/17/10 . chapter 1
AWW !
Lucy 12/13/10 . chapter 9
Hahahahahahaha I think I love you! Cow tipping? oh god your the first person in like the world that has known let alone talked about cow tipping. :) Great story btw you should get it published.
annah 11/14/10 . chapter 26
Found the FP site, and found your story. I enjoyed it VERY much. I'm now going to read the sequel. I know it's been a few years since you wrote this. I can imagine how amazing of a writer you are now, because this story was amazing. Thanx for the reading enjoyment.
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