Miscellaneous grammar mistakes, but love the plot so far - keep updating!

hehe...love this...keep writing

hah! i read this story a few weeks ago and reread it again. i just love the plot! PLEASE try and update! PS can you try and read my story? i need to see what i need to update... u can critasize (SP?) all you want! i need to see whats needed to be changed to make it better.

Pease, love, and mcr,MFTS

this is a great beginning plz update soon!

This is a great start to a very promising story. I am intrigued.

please continue with this story and update soon!

Happy Writings!

Wow. This is a fabulous start to a great story! Bravo! UPDATE SOON!

love it so far. please update soon.

this sounds like a great story! as always. i don't have as much time as i used to to read and work on my stories and poems so i am sorry this reveiw is kinda late! D *hugglz* rowan

this story is SO good! please update... now!

woah really good

haha thats awesome

I absolutely (sp?) love this story. In fact, I love all of your stories. I hope you continue all of them because they are all just so wonderful. They all have great plots and story lines. This one is great, and I can't wait to find out what happens. I am so excited, and I can't wait until you update again, which I hope is soon (which you probably have heard thousands of times) ! Great job!

Can't wait to read what happens next!

I L0VE IT!

Wow that was awesome. i cant wait to read more. You are such a talented writer! Write more soon :)