How wonderful. I have no criticism for this whatsoever. The words flow so beautifully, and... I have no more words, just so beautiful. Sing to us again.
this falls over itself beautifully, it's tirelessly enjoyable, very descriptive yet poetic... love the use of the word "inexorable" and the line:"You never noticed the meanings clinging to the corners"
In some way's this sounds like me but I'm not living a nightmare. I've thought about my life being this way when I sort things out in my head. It's a very good poem. I love it!
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