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| Kaybookworm 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseAh! I need more! I love all of your stories so far. I really want to see how this one will turn out! PLEASE! Update soon. I'm begging you! |
| Garen Ruy Maxwell 2006-12-07 ch 3, | abuseThis is hysterical. The characters are interesting and vivid, and the plot is unfolding at just the right pace. And I didn't see a single mechanical error. Good work, you rock. |
| J.E.Wyatt 2006-10-25 ch 3, | abuseOh wow oh wow, it's been a while since I've read anything FP. com (Excluding some short stories which I found time to read in my idle hours). Anyways, love it! I always did love reading something about Pianists! Because I love playing the piano myself, lols. Your story intrigued me the moment I read it...actually, far before that, the moment I read the title of your story! I do hope you can update that..."working for Nicholas...etc" I'm loving that one...really do hope you'll continue on with it! -J.E.Wyatt P.S. I sent you this private message thing. Like, on your account, there's this "send a message" button and a pressed it and wrote some stuff...I have no idea if it was sent or not. |
| SweetNamelessRose 2006-10-24 ch 3, | abuseI must say that I was quite surprised when I opened by e-mail and found a new story from you. Then I realized that this was chapter 3 of a story that was started last year! I've just finished reading all three chapters, and I love your writing style. I'm not sure if I've ever reviewed your stories (bad reader, I know), but they are amazing. Your style is exactly what I love, virtually never has spelling errors (a little OCD on my part, lol), and is absolutely captivating. I LOVE YOUR WRITING. Your combination of romance (I'm a diehard) and historical fiction just really makes my day. My favorite was the one with the sisters (the name's not quite coming right now). It was impeccably written, all the twists and turns of the plot were amazing...did I mention I love your writing? PLEASE continue updating frequently. I know it must be difficult, but I for one really appreciate your stories. You have an amazing talent that I really admire...I only wish that I could write half as well as you...keep the chapters coming! I just reread my review and realized that I sound a bit like an obsessed fan...which I am! Historical fiction + Romance + S. Renee = a match made in heaven =) Keep up the amazing work! |
| castaways and cutouts 2006-10-24 ch 3, | abuseI love it! Update soon! I'm interested to see what happens with them all!! |
| R.M.Whitaker 2006-10-23 ch 3, | abuseO, I really, really like BOTH of these new characters you've introduced! I'm excited about this story! Every chapter seems to be even better than the last! And I love the way you describe things, Renee! I could see it all so perfectly in my head! |
| jamie 2006-07-28 ch 2, anon. | abuseplease go on. i want to read this. |
| Sakru angelqueen 2006-07-28 ch 2, | abuseYeah a period piece I love those. I thought ti was good so far. |
| Angelic Brunette Hermione 2006-06-22 ch 1, | abuseThis review is in thanks for reviewing my own story. I'm flattered you took time to critique, too. I don't mind a "harsh" review now and then. You didn't just focus on my errors but you also praised my accomplishments. I don't mind reviews like that- I'll be able to correct my mistakes and learn from them, too. OK, OK, SPOILER TIME: You asked about Marta and Vicky: (a) What role does Marta play, and (b) What's J and V's relationship?By not revealing too much, for (a) I put Marta into the plot to make the story interesting so the POV won't switch back and forth from Jacob to Vicky, ect. ect. While Marta is only a minor character- she will create an impact on Jacob and the other members of the BEF whom the Arlons helped. You'll hear from Marta more in the future. (B) Vicky and Jacob have an interesting relationship. You'll learn about them more in a future chapter (Ch. 5). I'll explain more about their relationship after Ch. 5 is posted, if you have more confusion. |
| Angelic Brunette Hermione 2006-06-21 ch 2, | abuse“Only the weaklings get sick on ships like this [like Fred.]” “He couldn’t hold down a meal for his entire honeymoon . . .the bastard.” Will looked up, “But I thought you said I’m just like Fred?” That line was classic! Made me fall out of my chair laughing. ABH PS: I was wondering if you could review my story "Never Turn Your Back on it." since I'm kind of desperate for reviews. |
| ItalianBellaGabi 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abuseYay, I really like this story! you should definately update! I would have trouble making my main character a guy I believe but you do a real good job at it! This makes me want to put on a flirty dress and go swing dancing **dances**~gabi |
| R.M.Whitaker 2006-06-02 ch 2, | abuselol! Bravo! Very good, Renee! This scene was worthy of a Fred Astaire and Ginger Rogers movie! lol! Mr. and Mrs. Waters are quite the characters. Will we be seeing more of them? I must say, I'm getting rather excited about this story :) |
| castaways and cutouts 2006-06-01 ch 2, | abuseHAHAHA! I love it already! I'm really interested to see what happens! Just a constructive comment- a little bit more description would be nice. But really, if you want to keep it the way it is, it's still excellent, just a thought I had about the description. I really like your characters, especially the Waterses (they're hilarious), and I think Will/Fred will turn out to be an interesting character!! UPdate again soon! gaby |
| Silvestria 2006-06-01 ch 2, | abuseThis is one of the few truly funny stories I've read here. Congratulations! :) |
| katieee 2005-11-14 ch 1, | abusethis is really good. k3aly |