hey,
i really love this story;i read part 2 also!
i think that the main idea is good but sometimes some of the ideas are a bit confusing
like u knoe in ch.5 u never said before that both jaycee and jackie were telepathic the reader had to figure that out
anyways i was just wonderin how many chapters there might be and when thte next one would be out
i can;t wait to read the next chapter
k have fun writing
(ur probabily gonna become a great author!)

cheers,
soundy13

wow, now this is gettin interesting! :)

whats the 'wolfs' motives?

I MUST KNOW! UPDATE SOON PLEASE! :D

this story is coming along very nicely... and this part was simply wonderful and motivationg...

so sweet... i love it! :)

keep it up! ;)

ooh, nice twist... such a hard decision...

you really are amazing...

Sorry it took me a while to review. But I like the chapter short and sweet.

yep, i see...

and its really working... great job my friend! :)

drawing from personal experience is sometimes a really good touch to something like this... makes it all the more real...

this was a brilliant chapter, so sweet, and so sincere...

again, wonderful job and continue soon... :)

Aw. That was cute.

Great conflict. Keep it up!

ah... the confusion of love...

well described... and i love how they discussed the boys coming into their world... nicely done...

please continue soon! :)

Curioser and curioser.Keep it up.

thats so cool... i personaly congradulate you on having your very own book published! so exiting!

okay, anyway... im loving this, as always.. i can really feel how Jaycee feels in this... how torn she is...

cool as ever! keep up the brilliant work!

Hey. So I'm re-reading this chapter for fun.

It's interesting. The dialogue is a bit strained...I'm not sure HOW the characters are saying WHAT their saying, so that makes their statements somewhat confusing.

The younger children are cute though, and Aaron's interaction with them is equally cute.

So yeah. When do we get to see more?

cool... cute... i like it...

babies everywhere... :)

woo... another great piece of artistico chapter!! *thumbs up*