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slayn 2008-04-08 . chapter 1
Ah, now this is more my kind of story after all the love stuff. I like the overall comparison of actors and actresses. Murdering your audience is an interesting way for the actors to break the 4th wall. ;)

Why is the beginning of each stanza bolded? I kept trying to connect them as some sort of secret message or hidden meaning type of thing but I couldn't figure anything out. :(

I'm really, really bad at understanding poetry, but am I to understand that the girl learns at the end that she is one of the 'actors'? It says she was found, and I assume that is the significance for why she wasn't killed. The actors have to have had a reason for leaving her alone.
Let's Pretend. 2006-01-15 . chapter 1
That was so poetic and sad.. :( I love how you wrote it, tho!
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