I just finished this last night, but didnt have any time to review it till today. I just want to say, I absolutely love this story. It reminds me a lot of Eva Ibbotson books. And she is one of my favorite authors, so good job! This story was really great.

Ok, I read the prequel and now this one...And gosh, the minute I read about Amelia, I hated her!! I am so glad that it turned out this way. George is so much better for Nathan. He understands her and vise versa...it's just too cute.

Lovely and elegantly told, made all the more charming by a unique blend of characters. Well done.

aww, loved it. great plot and the character development was perfect. i love storylines like this. where one of the main characters falls for their significent others friend or sister. and you wrote it perfectly.

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Wow! So sorry I haven't read this yet, for some reason, it didn't tell me you'd updated, I've been checking and checking to see if you had updated because your story has been one of my favorites! So, now that I've apologized for my ignorance... I loved the catch from the bookstore ladder, very lovely. And him finding the note, and going to get her at the train station...Perfection! I loved it all, the whole story, so well written and truly enjoyable to read. I think the plot was so well thought out and I never expected the Amelia, Albert twist, so good job there. And George and Nathan are perfect for each other! Congratulations! I can't wait to read your next one! Good luck, but I'm sure it will be excellent.

That was thoroughly satisfying. I loved it from the beginning to the end. You were able to bring out all kinds of emotions from me while I was reading, and very few authors are able to do it so consistently throughout the story. Congratulations.

aw...that was just TOO lovely to put into words. I've followed this story for a long time and it's one of the best I've read. Thanks for writing such a great story,
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Lovely, lovely! *Applauds* I have so thoroughly enjoyed this story, and this is a wonderful ending. I'm a little puzzled whether George is going to give up going to school and head off with Nathan (I assume she's going to do the latter), but it was wonderful nonetheless and the perfect ending to a great story. George and Nathan are so spectacularly REAL characters - spectacular in the sense they practically leap off the page, because it suddenly strikes you just how much they seem like people you might actually know - even if you've never met anyone quite like them before in your life. I loved how Nathan found George's note in the garden, and how it was written - so very George-like! Perhaps a sequel to this great story may lie somewhere in the future, I hope?

I look forward to reading Latham Manor! From what I've read about it, it sounds fascinating. Keep up the great work! :)

excellent job

I will have to read the rest of this story when I have some spare time. But I really enjoyed what I've read so far!

YEAH! George and Nathan got together. (: This was an amazing ending, and I just loved everything about it. Can't wait to start reading "Lantham Manor"

HURRAY! What a marvelous, marvelous ending! Truly, I mean that! It may have been predictable, as you said, but I love predictable! lol. Shocking endings can be fun, but it would never have worked here. This is the only way it could have ended. So perfect!

And I don't know why, but I love that it ended in a train station. It just seems like such a romantic place! Where soldiers bid their sweethearts adieu and long lost lovers meet again and . . . I've always wanted to go to a real train station. I've only been to Union Station, which used to be a really old train station here in St. Louis but is now transformed into a mall. There aren't many good stores there (except for a really cool Beatles store where I once bought a t-shirt and a key-chain! lol), but there are different sections where they left the train station unharmed and there's all this really old, beautiful architecture and wood molding and such. I hope I can go on a train sometime too. How fun! And it's so perfect that George and Nathan would declare their love there, in a place of transportation, since they're now going to be traveling around all their lives together! lol.

I loved the section where he was doing his yardwork and every task reminded him of her too! And what fate that he found her old letter there! Loved it, loved it, loved it. Even if this wasn't always your favorite story, I really liked it! Such great characters! And now I'm so excited to start "Latham Manor!" You have to promise to post the first chapter as soon as you can! Bye!

It definitely was short...but you did accomplish your purpose I suppose. Of course, I'm waiting for the confession of love from both sides, so I was a little dissappointed to find only Daisy talking to him...haha. But I will wait patiently for the confessions, I just hope you get them to us soon!!

Wow, that was a short chapter. lol. I didn't even look at the scroll bar and when I can to the end, I was very surprsied. Anyway, short chapters every once in a while never hurt anybody, as long as it had what it needs in it, which this obviously did. Though short, it was a good chapter. Update soon.

Sometimes chapters are meant to be short, so I'm glad you didn't expand this one unnecessarily. The part describing how alone Nathan was- and how the silence enveloped him like a glass cup- was beautifully described! Just after that though, I noticed that you accidentally forgot to capitalize Daisy and that you wrote that she "lay" instead of "laid" at Nathan's feet. And watch those homonyms (is that the write word?). Vanes should be veins, when Nathan's thinking about his kiss with George. Just silly little mistakes.

But poor, poor Nathan! I hope he's not sad and lonely for too long. At least he's still got the book from George to keep him occupied a bit! Update again soon! I can't wait for the ending!