wow. that was really great! and original.

that was funny, but i really liked it. i wonder how it is for people who actually sleepwalk. i've never done that before, but i can say i've had many weird dreams where i sleeptalk to.

anyways i really really like the story. ^_^

Haha, these guys are so snarky. They're incredibly hot, too. I loved reading every bit of this. I haven't read anything in first person with such flowing diction in a long time, and I'm sad to be finished reading it.

Excuse me while I continue fanning myself.

That was so funny. You had me rolling by the "treasure chest".

I tried to figure out what he was doing as he dreamed and was trilled every time I got it right.

"I took into my mouth his thumb that he’d been grazing against my lips" this is kind of awkward. Maybe he grazed his thumb against my lips and I suck it into my mouth. Or something.

Great job. And you managed the whole thing with no names. College students in the dorm, I'm guessing.

I liked it. :) Very imaginative. Seems like a fun way to be woken up. XD

haha, that was great, yay for kinky sleepwalkers! ;P

Haha, poor guy! Luckily it turned out okay. This was hilarious.

absolutely loved it so hot

Great story - cute, hot, and funny. I love his dreams.

I translated the Spanish a bit more directly, but that works.

Livi

This story was wonderful! So adorable, and what a great idea! I love all of the dreams you came up with in this one, so cute. I just cant' get over it. My favorite fic of the day.

Very cute. I like the dream sequences and the adorable ending.

I thought that was hilariously adorable. ;D

That was really nice. You did a really great job with describing his dreams. Really great job and I liked the idea alias plot.

Amazing, incredable! so, so, so, so cute! The dream where he was a girl was my favorite! That was hilarious!

I have to say, I love your form of writing. This one-shot was most enjoyable. My favorite part would have to be him and the treasure...I just found that utterly humorous.

Once again, I love it =)