WOW this was really good!! I adored it!! Really really really reall adored it! I mean its really sad this stories finished, the characters were all really well portrayed and it was easy to become entranced by the story!! I hope that there is another story on its way...cause dis one roxed!! Alexa xox

I have finally got around to reading his one. I got a nasty migraine the first time around, mind you. Anyway, read this in between writing about Olivier being confused (what else is new!) . . . yes.

I like Katrina. She was a fun little character. I have one like her in The Bane of Rendsberg. His name is Josef Preetz . . . so I didn't steal the idea, mind you! Someone has to know what is going on with those idiots!

Ah, you explained why Lizzie didn't go flumpf! (Mind you, one of my special words indeed . . . never got that far in Travellers) I always thought that there would be something special about a vampire, who did not pass the curse.

You still didn't come to a conclusion as to what happened to Geoffrey. Ah! The subject of the next story! I don't have a snazzy title for that one. (I have spent the whole night writing about a very confused ex-ghost! I am plum out of ideas for such things!)

And it is sweet that Lizzie makes up with her friend and so does Deacon. Indeed Riley has much left to protect, but then again, if the sole vampire leaves town, then that does leave them wide open for lycan attacks. The vampire organization can't be much in the way of protection. Still that can be a story unto itself.

Oh, and I have a character in Travellers named Rose, then there is a Rose in a story I am reading on this site, and lastly, there is Rose on the Dr. Who series they are running on Sci-Fi! Busy name indeed!

Till I see you on that other story!

Aw... is this over??!! This chapter is so good!! Even thought it is very long but still good!! Really really good!!

wow wow wow

good sister!

lol and loads of wkd new ppls! lol also lovign the premonitions!! lol

anywho...glad ur thinking of the third one but focus on death and the other one now...lol

Rachel xx

AAW! i want to hug you! i love this astory SO much and 'm sad to let it go! but i have to say i LOVED the ending! and even though i didn't get to see Deacon get turned i KNOW he will get turned and that's GREAT! lol. i loved the whole thing so much. great work on it! i'm gonna cry now. well, i guess this is the end of Lizzie Rose. BUT you said there is going to be a sequel! YAY!! lol.

awesome work on this and i'll try to update broken love story soon! great way to end this story! i loved it!*claps*

OH WHY DID YOU HAVE TO END IT SO SOON!?I wanna cry, I'm so confused and...I dunno, but it really was a great chapter! REALLY long! Just as I like them to be...hehe!

Anyway you did good and I really loved the whole of the story! I wished you could have wrote more about Riley though...but anyway, I gots to watch ma invasion so I'll be waiting patiently for ur new story...whenever u decide to write it...in the meantime I'll think I'll review Blood Donor...yeah, when I have time during the week.

U ARE GREAT!

Ciao,

Frm Tasha -x-

I should be able to update my story by the end of this month coz I have a 2 weeks holiday then!! Yay!! Anyway.. great chapter.. but how can Lizzie survive in the sun??!! I know I know.. you are not going to tell me.. :( Let me just say something again - great chapter!! :P

Ah, it was a close call with Rudi indeed! It is not to say that he isn't dead after all this.

Ah, and that fur that Sylvia is wearing . . . could it be her daughter's. Yes, that is a real sick thought, but they are lycans and they think a little different than normal humans.

Oh hell, let Lizzie bite Deacon and vampirize him and get it over with!! We all know he wants it!! Oh well, yay for Harold. What happened to Geoffrey? Is his fur hanging over Harold's mantle . . . okay, maybe not? Just curious.

I would think that Lizzie was able to withstand the sunlight because she is an unbitten vampire and she was technically born into this existence, but it is still a harrowing experience.

Oh, and Lucifer gets tied up at some point in time during the Bane of Rendsberg. Vampires in bondage . . . sounds like a title for another story!!

I think after reading this for so long... I should review... hehe... man... is their going to be part three? This was good... keep going!

WOW!! I luv all these characters!! I love the story plan...and the story itself!! it is amazingly written and very intriguing!! i'm hanging on to every word here!! LOL!! PLEASE KEEP IT UP AND UPDATE SOON!! alexa xox

*gasps* :O one more chapter! whoah. i'll miss it so much. but at least i can read some of you other stories too.

i just love Deacon all worried about her and stuff. *tears up* he's so sweet. i did the happy dance when she stabed Rudi. :D

great chapter! update soon! and happy birthday in 17 days. lol. :)

haha so dear sister yer was good...haha i no what happens! so ner! but neways yer tis good and actualyl wuite long./...hahaha lol

so neways doen and done...like u asked!!

Rachel

Ooh yay! You finally updated! I loved this chapter, but I so wished it was longer- and I cannot believe it is nearly the end. I wanna cry. But anyway yeah...I liked the chapter and I can't wait until the nxt chapter!

(And I'm still trying to write that same stupid chapter for the story...anywayz, I'll try to finish it soon.)

Ciao,

Frm the Delightful Tasha ;) -x-

Cahterine seems very nice about it all, and Rachel needs to get over herself. She really needs to chill.

Richard did give some good advice in that Lizzie needs to get away from her friends for many and various reasons. The lycan problem is a big one. Another thing is her friends will grow old, while she doesn't.

I like how you write Richard. I like characters who know what's going on, but they aren't really willing to tell you. My character Christopher is really an ** that way, but I love him all the same.

I absoloutly love it so far! Please update ASAP! This story is one of my favorite's and I can't wait to see how it turns out!

TTFN

Spirit of the Sky