all of them are really good, short and sweet, my fav is "family" it has a real struggle in the tone. You really are a really good writer :) keep it up x

Really cute from what i've read. But I remember when you said that one time that these are parts of poems...so am i even reading the whole thing? LoL but from what I read, those four lines truely sum up the sweet emotion this is illuminating.

These are all wonderful,my favourite is the fourth one,"self torment".The rhyming is really well done.:) nice pieces you have here writing.

I like the last three lines, the first not so much.

Thats is cool, short and simple!

aw, i really like feelings of romance a

It starts off like it has a powerful message but than it just ends out of the blue and that doesn't give us much to make of the poem. Try adding a few verses or something and tell me if u edit it; 'cuz it seems like this would be really good!

Wishdreamer

its sweet.

- I liked it too. You chose an excellent verse. It was beautiful. I love the idea you came up with, picking verses and posting...neat.

HarlequinPlease fix me...

My personal favorite for this series

I remember these...

really good. no wonder they're your favorite verses. i especially like "self torment"

clever, one of my favorites of of like how it is.

families. cant live with them, cant live without i dont know if that really is true.

ah, wonderful metaphor i hadnt read the title i would have thought it was a person.

close reading. woo.

oh, i think i know .

kind of goes with the music i am listening to. but kind of not.

intruiging.