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Ellin Louise
2006-04-09
ch 1,
abuseI love the way you format your poems.this one is very brief, which works well with the content. The last two lines take this poem from great to amazing.

Definently adding you to my favs list.
the naked civil servant
2006-02-21
ch 1,
abusewow. i'm not sure if i interpreted this right, but... wow. beautiful.
elvenstorm
2006-02-03
ch 1,
abusePretty words in a morbid way. Nice poem well done x
kario
2006-01-21
ch 1, anon.
abusegood job...love this one! excellent!
Angelic Hellraiser
2006-01-03
ch 1,
abuseI liked that! KEEP IT UP!
Laura Elizabeth
2006-01-03
ch 1,
abusethis was a very interesting read. I like that your style is different from others. this was a good poem... keep going!
shinco
2005-12-07
ch 1,
abuseI'M SO SORRY! You've still reviewed me, but I've been slacking off! OH, MY GOSH! Please forgive me! This had really good imagery in it and it was a very nicely done poem... just dark, lol
flaming.footprints
2005-12-04
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful. Mind shattering. I love this. You rock my world.

~Shavo
Ajna
2005-12-02
ch 1,
abuseThe first line got a melancholic giggle out of me. I remember a few years back, a friend did just that and wore a belly-shirt to show it off to everyone who bothered to look. Very nicely done, I like the format of this poem very much. :)
my failure
2005-11-24
ch 1,
abuseabsolutly wonderful poem!
Learah Kaelar
2005-11-21
ch 1,
abuseThis is beautifully written! Wow, I'm amazed...the & is a little annoying, but not much, so. yeah. Rock on!

Blessed be!
s m e l l . o f . r a i n
2005-11-19
ch 1,
abuse=twitch= Interesting to say the least. I like how you left all these questions unanswered...
in theory
2005-11-19
ch 1,
abuseThe "&" is a little repetitive, but besides that, I like this a lot, nice job :)
catseyeview
2005-11-18
ch 1,
abusewhat can I say, "Wow"!
not sure yet
2005-11-17
ch 1,
abuseit's dirty and sick and sad

very pretty, i would rave but that's not my true reaction

it made me feel sick and horny and lovesick and tired, o so tired

beautiful poem
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