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| Ellin Louise 2006-04-09 ch 1,  | abuseI love the way you format your poems.this one is very brief, which works well with the content. The last two lines take this poem from great to amazing. Definently adding you to my favs list. |
| the naked civil servant 2006-02-21 ch 1, | abusewow. i'm not sure if i interpreted this right, but... wow. beautiful. |
| elvenstorm 2006-02-03 ch 1, | abusePretty words in a morbid way. Nice poem well done x |
| kario 2006-01-21 ch 1, anon. | abusegood job...love this one! excellent! |
| Angelic Hellraiser 2006-01-03 ch 1, | abuseI liked that! KEEP IT UP! |
| Laura Elizabeth 2006-01-03 ch 1, | abusethis was a very interesting read. I like that your style is different from others. this was a good poem... keep going! |
| shinco 2005-12-07 ch 1, | abuseI'M SO SORRY! You've still reviewed me, but I've been slacking off! OH, MY GOSH! Please forgive me! This had really good imagery in it and it was a very nicely done poem... just dark, lol |
| flaming.footprints 2005-12-04 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Mind shattering. I love this. You rock my world. ~Shavo |
| Ajna 2005-12-02 ch 1, | abuseThe first line got a melancholic giggle out of me. I remember a few years back, a friend did just that and wore a belly-shirt to show it off to everyone who bothered to look. Very nicely done, I like the format of this poem very much. :) |
| my failure 2005-11-24 ch 1, | abuseabsolutly wonderful poem! |
| Learah Kaelar 2005-11-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautifully written! Wow, I'm amazed...the & is a little annoying, but not much, so. yeah. Rock on! Blessed be! |
| s m e l l . o f . r a i n 2005-11-19 ch 1, | abuse=twitch= Interesting to say the least. I like how you left all these questions unanswered... |
| in theory 2005-11-19 ch 1, | abuseThe "&" is a little repetitive, but besides that, I like this a lot, nice job :) |
| catseyeview 2005-11-18 ch 1, | abusewhat can I say, "Wow"! |
| not sure yet 2005-11-17 ch 1, | abuseit's dirty and sick and sad very pretty, i would rave but that's not my true reaction it made me feel sick and horny and lovesick and tired, o so tired beautiful poem |