I love the way you format your poems.this one is very brief, which works well with the content. The last two lines take this poem from great to amazing.

Definently adding you to my favs list.

wow. i'm not sure if i interpreted this right, but... wow. beautiful.

Pretty words in a morbid way. Nice poem well done x

good job...love this one! excellent!

I liked that! KEEP IT UP!

this was a very interesting read. I like that your style is different from others. this was a good poem... keep going!

I'M SO SORRY! You've still reviewed me, but I've been slacking off! OH, MY GOSH! Please forgive me! This had really good imagery in it and it was a very nicely done poem... just dark, lol

Beautiful. Mind shattering. I love this. You rock my world.

~Shavo

The first line got a melancholic giggle out of me. I remember a few years back, a friend did just that and wore a belly-shirt to show it off to everyone who bothered to look. Very nicely done, I like the format of this poem very much. :)

absolutly wonderful poem!

This is beautifully written! Wow, I'm amazed...the & is a little annoying, but not much, so. yeah. Rock on!

Blessed be!

=twitch= Interesting to say the least. I like how you left all these questions unanswered...

The "&" is a little repetitive, but besides that, I like this a lot, nice job :)

what can I say, "Wow"!

it's dirty and sick and sad

very pretty, i would rave but that's not my true reaction

it made me feel sick and horny and lovesick and tired, o so tired

beautiful poem