i like this but my brain is full of Narnia so this makes me think of Tumnus.

Very cool, beautiful use of imagery and symbolism. Your word choices are precise and displays the image well. Very good!

In reference to your review...Sorry I didn't know that you are a guy. Not very many do write. Sorry...again. This is such an amazing poem. It's sad.

:tilts head to one side and smiles:

Simple, yet elegant; I really liked the hidden feelings and messages between the lines.

EB

i like the way you've used a scarf to explain the thoughts and feelings he went through. good idea. nice poem, keep it up.